Sasha's Tsunami Post !!xx

Hiya Again Everyone !!! I have been asked to write about someone else's blog and i have chosen my best friend Sasha's blog !!!!x My teacher has asked me to write about one of her posts and i chose her tsunami post,

I think Sasha has used alot of detail in this post and i feel exactly the same way as her !!!! All the poor people in Japan who have had terrible things happen to them because of the Tsunami, I also think Sasha's Tsunami post is good because she has added her own opinion and she has explained how the children must be coping and how families must be coping with the devastation of losing family members, their homes, and much more !!!! She has put herself in someone else's shoes who has been caught in the tsunami and she has explained how she would feel if she was one of those people !!!x
1 thing she could do to improve - include more facts about the tsunami
1 thing that is particularly good -  she has said her own opinion which is always good

got to go for now , bye !!!x :)
p.s-all of those people following my blog i will keep you all updated on my new posts